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Unfamiliar words

A common problem in fantasy and science fiction stories is drowning the reader in made-up words at the start of... (More...)

What kind of world is your story set in?

Here's something I see often in stories: The story appears to be set on modern Earth. Everyone looks and acts... (More...)

For writers researching little details

Just happened across the LJ community called little_details, which provides a place for writers to ask questions to help make... (More...)

A few notes on women in fiction

tacityhydra just mentioned the Mo Movie Measure in passing; I was going to post this comment in response to that... (More...)

Song chorus progression

One of the things I like about some country songs is the way the choruses work. For example, there seems... (More...)

Tiptree on genius

David M recently mentioned ambition and genius, among other things. I've recently finally gotten back to reading Julie P's Tiptree... (More...)

Plotting at the keyboard

I mentioned to Mary Anne this afternoon that I pretty much can't plot (whether fiction or games) unless I'm sitting... (More...)

Pet peeve: The future of evil

(Warning: this entry contains gross imagery.) We see this kind of story fairly often: First the author postulates a future... (More...)

Complete your changes

Advice to anyone who writes anything on a computer: Say you've written the line "The men ran down the hill."... (More...)

Mysteriosity

Been seeing a fair number of submissions lately in which Something Mysterious Is Going On--and by two-thirds of the way... (More...)

Dead narrators aren't much fun

Once upon a time, not so very long ago, there was a very popular movie that had a surprise twist... (More...)

Giveaway titles

Say you've written a story in which a driver picks up a mysterious hitchhiker, and in the end there's a... (More...)

Writing challenge/exercise: long titles

Not sure what to write next? Here's a challenge: Come up with a title that's at least seven words long... (More...)

Throwing in the hat

The discussion has taken its toll, and I've decided: I'm declaring myself to be a write-in candidate for the SFWA... (More...)

Women on the Hugo ballot

As has been widely noted, on this year's Hugo ballot there's only one work by a woman among the twenty... (More...)

Pirate antho deadline imminent

I've been meaning to post for months about Ann and Jeff VanderMeer's forthcoming pirate anthology, Fast Ships, Black Sails, but... (More...)

Double spacing

During the past year, three different authors have submitted stories to us in which there were two spaces after every... (More...)

What do you want in a writing tool?

I've been asked to relay the following question to y'all writers: What would you want in the ultimate writer tool?... (More...)

Genre conventions

I read some romance recently--a Crusie novel (reissue) I hadn't previously encountered, and then a set of three novellas by... (More...)

Items: Writing advice

In the past few days, I keep coming across various items of advice and commentary about writing. (The focus here... (More...)

Unusual points of view

Some notes on point-of-view handling in works by three authors: One idiosyncrasy of H. Beam Piper's writing, at least in the... (More...)

Posting stories online before publication

I'm pretty sure most of y'all regular readers know this, but I figure it can't hurt to say it again... (More...)

Reprints, quoting, transclusion, and Creative Commons

It seems like a bunch of stuff related to reusing material has been coming up lately. For example, various people... (More...)

Birthdays and anniversary

More and more, lately, it seems like I have both happy and sad things to post about on the same... (More...)

Market listing/submission tracker

I just found out about Duotrope's Digest, a site that's a combined market list and submission tracking system. (It's been... (More...)

Assumptions and queries

Say you're a writer, and you want to submit to a magazine. Say you've actually read their submission guidelines, but there was something in them that you think the editors can't possibly have meant. (More...)

Ones and zeroes and copies

It's fairly common in science fiction these days to see sentient beings in electronic form--whether artificial intelligences or uploaded human... (More...)

Assorted congratulations

Congratulations are in order to: Mary Anne, who's going to teach at Clarion next year! Tim, who sold two novels... (More...)

Call for subs: Men Speak Out

Shira Tarrant is editing an anthology of essays titled Men Speak Out: ProFeminist Views on Gender, Sex and Power; below... (More...)

Mother's Day and birthdays and such

Belated happy Mother's Day to all of the mothers reading this! I'm always impressed by y'all. And, more generally, yay... (More...)

Becoming what they oppose

There's a trope I like a lot in fiction when it's done well: characters who are so ardent in their... (More...)

How I explained infodumps and saved humanity

"And now," Dr. Zurückgeschichte said, "please explain to me how an infodump works." "But why would I have to explain... (More...)

Surprise mini-check

I was on my way to sleep, but I just remembered to mention a recent event, and if I don't... (More...)

Long week

Assorted bits and pieces from the past week or so (some good, some not): (More...)

Quick note on cover letters

I've been seeing this a fair bit lately: cover letters in which authors explain that they haven't been published, but... (More...)

Genre levels

Some thoughts on plausibility and genre conventions. (More...)

Curly quotes

There continues to be tremendous confusion among some SH submitters over the distinction between curved (or slanted) quotation marks and... (More...)

Africa, the Other, and sf

Some items that may or may not add up to more than the sum of their parts: Okay, so there's... (More...)

Economy and efficiency as motivations in fiction

Something I see quite often in both submissions and published fiction (including movies) is plots that hinge on people taking... (More...)

Poignant documentation

I'm still not awake enough to post a more substantive entry, but as I was on my way to bed... (More...)

Word-processor paragraphing

I've had occasion recently to see a couple of authors' word-processor documents, and I've noticed that some authors are using... (More...)

Outline of Narnian history, plus nitpicking

I'm continuing to re-read the Narnia books. Will have more to say about that sooner or later, but for now,... (More...)

Items: Fanfic

A couple of notes on fanfic: Kathleen on Why fanfic? And why Final Fantasy fanfic in particular? First chapter of... (More...)

Beagle tonight in SF

Peter S. Beagle will be reading tonight in San Francisco, at the Make-Out Room, as part of Charlie Anders's "Writers... (More...)

Dark side of the Plot

About halfway through reading the Slate article "Star Wars: Episodes I-VI: The greatest postmodern art film ever," by Aidan Wasley,... (More...)

Don't spam the editors

Here's another piece of advice for writers. (Or anyone else, but writers are who I see doing this.) When you're... (More...)

Backstory

This occurred to me, more or less irrelevantly, while I was reading a story in Asimov's recently: Fiction is often... (More...)

Where to submit

A conversation with a certain neopro author (hope you don't mind that characterization) at WisCon made me think there ought... (More...)

Opportunity for self-promotion

I was in a bookstore the other evening; bought a recently published first novel by someone who I think is... (More...)

Nonpolitical (personal, minor) good news

Some things that've made me happy lately: At World Fantasy Con this past weekend, half a dozen people I didn't... (More...)

Planetary intelligences and surprise twist endings

Just once, I'd like to see a story in which there's a planet-wide network of interlinked computational elements and/or life... (More...)

Two Le Guin quotations

I see no reason not to use a journal as, among other things, a commonplace book. So I'll quote two... (More...)

The story of my weekend (II)

Friday through Sunday, we discussed various aspects of the craft of writing, critiqued stories, ate well (thanks largely to Mary... (More...)