Workshop
That previous entry was going to be a brief note about the game and a brief note about today's workshop session, but it got a little away from me.
About workshop, just wanted to say that it went well. I got pretty much exactly what I wanted to get out of it: all the critiques were brief and to the point and dead on target, and the workshoppers told me exactly what I needed to do with the story to make it work better, which is what I'd been hoping for. Now I just need to find the time to do the actual revisions.